Entertaiment is serious thing :P :P
I know it isnt adaption of AIW, they just use it to justifie some plot line but... i think i wrote what i think about it.
i hope you agree that things what supouse to be fun could be done well too, not sloppily...bc it makes all fun fade...
Story isnt "all over the place" ...it is way how they do it what is weird... they want to make it have very serious issues and then add rivers of sobs and tears - it makes it melodrama, then they make main male lead act "fugitive from madhouse style" what suits slapstick comedy, then they jump back to melodrama, then few ordinary drama cliche situations, then make lead actor fall in love from snap of fingers and make actor jump from one genre to other and back like frog...
I wouldnt complain if all this was made flow naturally but it feels like not fitting pieces put together....one, two times i can endure but if this continues it gets annoying and painful to watch.
I hope they can settle what they want make : meldodrama, romcom or slapstick bc seems that they dont have ability mix correctly them in one.
So...there isnt anything wrong with story/plot or with twists....it is about compleatly other things.
p.s. i hope you know how dramas are filmed, that scenes arent taken always in order what we see and get joined afterwards to right place? To make story flow naturally it needs at least one person who has ability keep storys inner logic up, so that it doesnt feel like....
