enjoyable short series
Overall: I enjoyed this indie production which is broken into 2 parts each about 20 minutes long. This is the link for part 1 https://youtu.be/Z6fxl9xoYNM There will be a season 2.Content Warnings: non con picture taking
What I Liked
- breaking the 4th wall (i.e. talking to the audience while in character)
- sweet moments
- the food sharing
- production value for what I assume was an indie production
Room For Improvement
- in part 2 they could have shortened the recap/flashbacks
- the female character taking pictures of them
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Awkward Script And Tedious Overall.
Review for both Part 1 (19min) and Part 2 (17min). Found on YouTube (Nov 2023 in the USA).Very poor writing and mediocre acting. Both parts felt tedious even though they were so short.
The interactions between the two leads are written very simply and are kind of cute but mostly boring. The 2nd lead is pretty wooden and I didn't feel much chemistry or magnetism between them.
The girl character is more a creepy fujoshi than a friend. The second season has a contrived love triangle. The way the new rival interacts with the the guy who can't figure out his feelings is so bizarre and laughably unrealistic.
The music (especially in part 1) and audio quality were good for a low-budget production. Cinematography was basic.
Felt like a waste of time to me.
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Crush in the open!
Not bad but not good either. It is obviously made on a shoestring budget so the production is lacking. Acting as well, unfortunately! The only originality this short drama has is breaking the fourth wall by the actors instead of voiceover explaining situations and revealing emotions.The short drama takes place in an always completely empty coffee shop where Bam gets to work with his crush, Mike who is a writer. In order to break the writing block, Mike asks Bam to help him enact love scenes for his next novel. These make Bam very confused so he confesses. Now it is Mike's turn to be confused. But Bam does everything in his power to help Mike see things (his own feelings!) clearly.
There is absolutely no chemistry between the actors who definitely need a few more acting lessons to make us believe they are at ease while acting: they were rather rigid and the line delivery was monotonous!
Still, point for the effort, the writing was solid and original. The music was too loud and cheerful and just underlined the (bad) acting.
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