I have been writing music, like lyrics and rhythms and stuff. My dream in life is to start a band and make it in the music industry. However, I need help with my lyrics, so I was wondering if you guys could comment on the lyrics I post and make suggestions to what could be done better. If you think that you are not sure what you're saying is helpful, say it anyway! I love feedback!
BTW: I am not going to put the whole song, just like some parts of songs that I have written that I am iffy about.
Feel free to ask for advice with your own lyrical poetry or song lyrics at any time! I am happy to help!
