Okay, so I'm just going to go over some things I did like in the show and things I didn't.

Things I liked:
The effort to make a gl (wlw relationships don't get much representation)
The communication between Mon and Sam at times
A lot of the moments they had were very cute
The subtle change in Sam's attitude at work (that could've just been because of Mon)
Tee and Yuki

Things I didn't like:
Sam's attitude towards Mon a lot of the time: 2 examples are in the 8th episode where she basically slut shamed her (if I were Mon I wouldn't have gone back to her) and in episode 10 where Mon rejected Sam's proposal and then Sam got mad (like ick).
The involvement of Sam's/Mon's friends in their sex life, like it's none of your business if they have sex or not and you shouldn't be trying to force them to do anything.
Kirk, is such a dick, proposing to someone at someone else's wedding, like really dude.
How naive and "stupid" they made Mon
And how annoying Sam is, getting mad at literally nothing.

I appreciate the attempt and the try at giving wlw relationships representation, but there are things that need improvement